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smudgeart, September 20th, 2014, 8:34 pm ( Reply )

@MegaAnimeFreak7: Okay, that's fine. There was no need to be rude, I'm not sure if that's what you were intending, but that's how it comes off. So I'm not going to give you any thought on it.
And the art style changes consistently. Since I only work with what I have and I'm still growing as an artist.
Little word of advice. Be careful how you word things.

@MegaAnimeFreak7: Considering this is my first webcomic ever, and it's not only ONLY a webcomic, but also a HOBBY on how I spend my time, I don't NEED to do anything. I'm sure you don't MEAN to come off as offensive, but you are being very offensive.

@Mikakitten : Thank you! There's... a lot more, you're like 10 chapters behindright now ahaha XD;; but yes, I hope you continue to enjoy.. updates should start again SOON, but im sick rn so not yet ://

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MegaAnimeFreak7, September 20th, 2014, 8:32 pm ( Reply )

Little word of advice. If you're going to leave a page as lineart, don't draw in the lines where the shadows and shading are supposed to go. Just leave it black for shadows and white for everything else, because trying to figure out what the lines on his face are is starting to irritate me.

MegaAnimeFreak7, September 20th, 2014, 9:05 pm ( Reply )

@smudgeart: I'm sorry if it came off that way. I meant it irritated my eyes... wait, that's not much better. Shit, I don't know how to phrase this. ^^;

And don't worry about the change in art. I understand all to well the growing process so I get it. Just... I don't know. Try STICKING to something I guess, cause going from a fully colored page to a sketchy one to lineart to one with toning then back to fully colored confuses the reader greatly on what the artist's angle is. You need to have something consistent

MegaAnimeFreak7, September 20th, 2014, 10:00 pm ( Reply )

@smudgeart: Alright. Sorry. If this is how you take constructive criticism never mind then... >_>

Mikakitten (Guest), June 5th, 2015, 5:54 pm ( Reply )

Love this page
I really love this page! Spooning! So pretty. Love the story so far! Hope you keep it up! I am really enjoying it!

Aiseiri, April 5th, 2016, 3:02 am ( Reply )

I am as a reader not irritated by any changes in your art. And even if I was I agree that you don't owe anything to anybody here. Great work

smudgeart, April 5th, 2016, 6:25 am ( Reply )

@Aiseiri: Wow, thank you. I actually really, really appreciate this... it was a real treat to check on this comic, this morning, and have this comment pop up. This makes me feel 100% better about myself and my ability to draw and create comics... and I just got up! Thanks a bunch, I'll carry the small bit of sweetness throughout my day :>

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