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smudgeart, May 29th, 2015, 2:45 pm ( Reply )


Update 2/2

EAMES HAS NO SHIRT ON AHAHHAHAAA foreshortening is a bitch and I don't even care anymore. I would actually really appreciate comments even though I still dunno how much imma post of this scene, because it would make me happy. Sure I'm a little shameless but for the past two days I didn't even touch a pen or pencil I'm not doing so hot.
But i did these two pages, so I guess I should get some pats on the back for that *patpatpatpat*

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smudgeart, May 29th, 2015, 2:56 pm ( Reply )

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@SchmetterlingGirl: Thanks.. I don't plan on dropping Untitled. I just haven't decided how much of this specific scene I'm going to draw out.. but thank you.

@DreamGazerT: It's the damned ARRMMMS. Eames isn't particularly muscular, but he isn't scrawny. Foreshortening made him look like he was bigger muscle wise then he really is, though.. and just.... arms. Blech.
But thanks, I pat myself on the back three times for you, so it's good enough

@shadowpen: I was trying soooo hard to get his expression right.. thank you for commenting on it, it was a serious pain in my ass. Ghost's on the last page, too.. but I did my best. thanks

@stormyormsby: Lol if only it had been simple to draw, then it would havae been really lovely.. but thank you

@LPKid: I'm getting so many pats i love it. And thank you, it really does mean a lot... This scene will continue a little bit more regardless, but I'll see about other things.. other things might be saved for later, too, we'll see. But thank you, again

@Riaya: Genetics, walking everywhere, lifting heavy boxes of books.... that's his physical make up XD

@msbl79: oh my gosh XDDD that's lots of wishes for sex. Thank you for the pats

@maxamillion: Thank you, that was very sweet.. Yeah, have never drawn... penises lol. It makes me feel a little strange, and if anything any sort of 18+that I do will end up being.. tasteful? At the very least, I try to make it come off as tasteful. This is a lot more about.. how much of the actual actions I want to portray more so than anything else. As in, I don't know if I want to draw out the full scene. You think this is where the tension break, but unfortunately, it isn't ahahaha. BUt there is a most definte time where everyone gets to see a full played out scene (though, depends how pornographic it gets, but the whole thing is played out at least) but that's not this one time... which I'm trying to debate what tells the story best while still making readers happy

@random-squid: ahh thank you

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SchmetterlingGirl, May 29th, 2015, 2:54 pm ( Reply )



Good for you, keeping this story going. It's definitely appreciated.

DreamGazerT, May 29th, 2015, 2:58 pm ( Reply )



Foreshortening is my mortal enemy, and any scene with shirtless men is appreciated no matter how short. I hope you will be doing better soon and if I could reach through a computer and pat your back I would. A virtual pat will need to suffice until we advance our technology a little farther, "pat,pat,pat".

shadowpen, May 29th, 2015, 3:45 pm ( Reply )



Eames' face... <3 :) the arms aren't bad, and he looks good, the anatomy is nice overall :D i really love his expression here!
*many pats*

stormyormsby, May 29th, 2015, 4:54 pm ( Reply )



O my gosh....This page is so simple it's beautiful!! I love it <3

LPKid, May 29th, 2015, 6:05 pm ( Reply )



*pat pat pat* You did amazing with the last two pages! I especially love Eames' face in this one. I certainly hope you continue on with this scene for a little while longer, but it's what you're comfortable with and what you're feeling like doing. Either way, I'm here for the long run. I love all of this!

I'm sorry you're not doing so hot love. Thank you very much for still spoiling us with two pages!

Fluffles( -' u'-), May 29th, 2015, 8:19 pm ( Reply )



Ooooh that bod <333333333

Riaya, May 29th, 2015, 11:30 pm ( Reply )



Eames is built niceeeee! <3 <3 <3 <3

msbl79, May 30th, 2015, 7:34 am ( Reply )


AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.

AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's getting real!

Yasssssssssssssssssssss

*Hopes for sex*

Oh my the shirt is cominggg offf

ahhhhhhhhhhh

P.S. *Pats @smudgeart on the back two pages and maybe sex*

maxamillion (Guest), May 30th, 2015, 7:38 pm ( Reply )



hi there :) , first time commenting on your series, but ive been enjoying it for a long time, this coment is mainly about what could come next in the content of your pages, i spose whatever your comfortable with, you can go for full on hentai/porn style and show everything, or be abit modist ( more yaoi/shounen ai) and show scenes where they are touching lovingly and gasping as such but being vague on the whole nudity/sex thing, its up to what you feel comfortable with drawing and how you want to portray their scene after so much build up to it.
all in all i really enjoy your comic and hope that you dont lose hope in drawing and creating and awesome story for it :)

random-squid, May 31st, 2015, 1:22 pm ( Reply )


I'm just gonna leave this here
Becuase you mentioned that you have had trouble with the arm anatomy. To be honest i didn't even notice it until you pointed it out :P

but anyway it's a huge anatomy masterpost that has a lot of tutorials for arm and shoulders + pretty much everything else on this planet:

http://stormbear.com/post/100534891116/art-masterpost-a-great-selection-of-art


arms and neck and shoulders are a little ways down and just to warn you, some of the links don't exist

Sunny_Grim, June 4th, 2016, 6:23 pm ( Reply )



them niples tho

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